16-05-2011, 09:08 PM
I FINALLY understood why I was having more writers block. It happened to me the last time too. The birth of another fan fiction was stopping me. I'm a long time fan of Golden Sun, and recently I have been drawn back into playing the games. I have no idea why I didn't see it before.
Background:
30 years ago, a group of eight powerful adepts, or users of psyenergy, saved Wayard, their world, from withering into nothing. By lighting the lighthouses and unleashing the Golden Sun, they both saved their world and nearly destroyed it at the same time. All that alchemy, the origin of psyenergy, was almost too great for the world to handle. Since then, every ten years, large vortexes appear. They suck up all psyenergy, and people fear they may be a warning of the Mourning Moon, the largest vortex to date 30 years ago. Their fears were true. Today, the original Warriors of Vale; Isaac, Venus (earth) adept, Garet, Mars (fire) adept, Ivan, Jupiter (wind) adept, Mia, Mercury (water) adept, Felix, Venus, Jenna, Mars, Sheba, Jupiter, and Piers, Murcury, are the ones who are both admired and despiced for their actions. Isaac, the greater of the two leaders in the group, lives atop Mt Aleph with his friend Garet to try to figure out why these vortexes keep appearing. Felix, the other leader, disappeared awhile ago, and no one knows where he is. Isaac and Garet are not alone, however. They live with their sons. Mathew, Venus, son of Isaac, and Tyrell, Mars, son of Garet. They are also often visited by Karis, Jupiter, daughter of Ivan. Due to the destruction of their Soar wing, thanks to Tyrell, they were sent to fight a Mountain Roc, a huge bird of stone, and pluck one of it's feathers for it's repair. Along their journey, they were thrown into another quest to save their world, like their parents. They were joined by Reif, Murcury, son of Mia, Amiti, Murcury, Sveta, Jupiter, queen of Belinsk and Beastman (a hybrid adept made when the Golden Sun rose), Eoleo, Mars, pirate and son of Briggs, now dead (Briggs, not Eoleo) and another Venus adept who's name escapes me. Together, they managed to throw the world into a nearly eternal eclipse, then bring it back into the light just in time. Afterwards, they parted ways, and Mathew, leader of the group, Tyrell, and Karis went back to the cabin atop Mt Aleph, only to find the Mourning Moon waiting for them. However, the story does not start there. During the eclipse, the shadow spread across the sea far enough to the Sea of Time, which holds Lemuria, an ancient city long thought to be gone. But not even Lemuria was prepared for the two supirses that occured that day. One was the eclipse. Two, they discovered they had a neighboring city. In the eclipse, the city, once concealed by bent rays of light to become completely invisible, shown very brightly that day. The light cast by that city was blinding to even Lemuria, and continued to shine until the eclipse was over, at which point it was once more concealed in light, but the damage had been done. They were seen, after taking so many precautions to avoid being detected. Their city, Lyresk, home to only adepts, filled to the brim with Venus, Mars, Jupiter and Murcury adepts, were scared they would be invaded. Scared that they would be forced to part with their greatest treasures. Their Princess Leona, she who predicts the future, and Prince Aren, he who changes the future. They were afraid they would have to part with their greatest treasures; Their Light adepts
We shall start, or resume if you will, the story at Mt Aleph, where Mathew, Tyrell, and Karis are stunned from fear, facing the Mourning Moon, the destruction of Angara, their home continent, at stake once again.
Chapter 1: Flee!
"T-T-Tyrell? M-M-Mathew? Please tell me that isn't what I think it is." Karis nearly pleaded.
"I wish I could Karis, I wish I could." Mathew said.
"Hey wait, where are dad and Isaac?" Tyrell asked, looking around the rocky surface.
"Surely they wouldn't stay here, right? Your dads are too smart to do that. I bet they left when they saw it to warn people. We should follow their lead." Karis said. Mathew nodded.
"We have to find our group as well. We could be in for a big fight here soon." Tyrell said.
"Are you crazy?!? Do you have any idea how long it will take to get to Belinsk again?!? And that's just to get Sveta! Think of the stops we'll have to make along the way to get the others! By that time, the Mourning Moon could have destroyed Angara!" Karis yelled.
"Karis has a point Tyrell. It would take far too long to get the others., we might not have a fight on our hands. All we can do now is find our dads and get out of here." Mathew said.
"Fine, but I'd feel better if we had the others here with us." Tyrell said.
"As would I old friend, but we can't always have what we want. Exhibit A." Mathew said, pointing at the Mouning Moon.
"Point taken." Tyrell said. The group ran as fast as they could, rushing down the mountain, until a faint yelling caught Mathew's attention.
"Wait, hold up guys. I think I hear someone yelling." Mathew said. He strained his ears to listen. The yelling grew steadely louder, and Mathew could make out his name, along with Tyrell's and Karis' being called. It was coming from back up the mountain, and was approaching them fast.
"I...I think that is my dad calling us!" Mathew said. And sure enough, he was right. Isaac, along with Garet, was running full speed down the mountain toward them. They both had large packs on their backs, and looked ready to travel. After another minute, they had caught up to them, both panting slightly.
"We thought you were already off the mountain." Mathew said.
"We were about to leave, but you beat us to it. We were still finishing up our preparations." Isaac said.
"For what?" Tyrell asked.
"Isaac thinks we will have a huge fight to deal with again, so he wants to go and gather up the others. He also think syou should do the same with your group." Garet said.
"That's what I said, but Karis insisted it would take too long." Tyrell said.
"It would have, but with my Quake Sphere and Odessey, along with Garet's Eruption and Liquifier psyenergy, we managed to buy enough time." Isaac said.
"How did you do that?" Tyrell asked.
"I cut the Mourning Moon into peices, then dug a huge crater in the ground." Isaac said.
"Then I shoved it into the crater, then turned it into a new volcano, which burned up the Mourning Moon. We did little more than delay it's return, however." Garet said.
"I missed your Odessey?!? Dang it! I was hoping to get some tips on mine. I think I'm doing it right, but I feel like their is something...loose in it." Mathew said.
"Later Mathew. For now, we part ways here. Meet up with us at Lemuria in one week. We might not have everyone by then, but we cannot afford to take any longer than that." Isaac said.
"We'll have to find Eoleo for that one, but I think we can do that." Mathew said.
"Alright, lets go. No time to waste!" Isaac declared, and they ran in opposite directions. Mathew heading toward Harapa, Isaac to Kalay, both hoping to get started on their member re-recruitment.
In the Sea of Time, five Lemurian ships gathered just on the outskirts of the hidden Lyresk. On the front boat, stood two Jupiter adepts, one male, one female.
"Ivan, Sheba, we cannot thank you enough for this. We are sorry if this is a bad time for the two of you, but we couldn't turn to anyone else." A lemurian said.
"It's alright. Now, what do you want us to do?" Ivan asked.
"No one in Lemuria is a Jupiter adept, being all Murcury adepts. None of us has the psyenergy Reveal. The two of you were the first ones to come to mind, and seeing as you two are so skilled with it, who better to ask? We need the two of you to use Reveal on this entire area. We have reason to believe there is something hidden here." He said.
"Yikes. That is a big area to reveal. Sheba, think you can do it with me?" Ivan asked.
"Easy enough with help." Sheba said. They clasped hands, and focused their psyenergy to a point where they had never done before.
"Lady Leona! Lord Aren! We are about to be discovered! What should we do?" A soldier asked. No responce, but the soldier knew he was heard. Deep in the palace, the soldier left them to think. Aren then turned to his twin sister Leona, who was in a deep meditation. After a second, she came out of it.
"What did you see?" Aren asked.
"We have a chance to speak with them, but if we fight, we will not win, and the two of us will die." Leona said.
"Music to my ears. You know what I have to say to that right? I say it whenever you have predicted our deaths in the past." Aren said, clasping on white-gold armor.
Leona nodded. "If you don't like life's hand"
"Fight for a better one." Aren finished. He gathered his other armor, and went to his always faithful Light Blade, and swung it on his back, ready to use when he would need it.
Background:
30 years ago, a group of eight powerful adepts, or users of psyenergy, saved Wayard, their world, from withering into nothing. By lighting the lighthouses and unleashing the Golden Sun, they both saved their world and nearly destroyed it at the same time. All that alchemy, the origin of psyenergy, was almost too great for the world to handle. Since then, every ten years, large vortexes appear. They suck up all psyenergy, and people fear they may be a warning of the Mourning Moon, the largest vortex to date 30 years ago. Their fears were true. Today, the original Warriors of Vale; Isaac, Venus (earth) adept, Garet, Mars (fire) adept, Ivan, Jupiter (wind) adept, Mia, Mercury (water) adept, Felix, Venus, Jenna, Mars, Sheba, Jupiter, and Piers, Murcury, are the ones who are both admired and despiced for their actions. Isaac, the greater of the two leaders in the group, lives atop Mt Aleph with his friend Garet to try to figure out why these vortexes keep appearing. Felix, the other leader, disappeared awhile ago, and no one knows where he is. Isaac and Garet are not alone, however. They live with their sons. Mathew, Venus, son of Isaac, and Tyrell, Mars, son of Garet. They are also often visited by Karis, Jupiter, daughter of Ivan. Due to the destruction of their Soar wing, thanks to Tyrell, they were sent to fight a Mountain Roc, a huge bird of stone, and pluck one of it's feathers for it's repair. Along their journey, they were thrown into another quest to save their world, like their parents. They were joined by Reif, Murcury, son of Mia, Amiti, Murcury, Sveta, Jupiter, queen of Belinsk and Beastman (a hybrid adept made when the Golden Sun rose), Eoleo, Mars, pirate and son of Briggs, now dead (Briggs, not Eoleo) and another Venus adept who's name escapes me. Together, they managed to throw the world into a nearly eternal eclipse, then bring it back into the light just in time. Afterwards, they parted ways, and Mathew, leader of the group, Tyrell, and Karis went back to the cabin atop Mt Aleph, only to find the Mourning Moon waiting for them. However, the story does not start there. During the eclipse, the shadow spread across the sea far enough to the Sea of Time, which holds Lemuria, an ancient city long thought to be gone. But not even Lemuria was prepared for the two supirses that occured that day. One was the eclipse. Two, they discovered they had a neighboring city. In the eclipse, the city, once concealed by bent rays of light to become completely invisible, shown very brightly that day. The light cast by that city was blinding to even Lemuria, and continued to shine until the eclipse was over, at which point it was once more concealed in light, but the damage had been done. They were seen, after taking so many precautions to avoid being detected. Their city, Lyresk, home to only adepts, filled to the brim with Venus, Mars, Jupiter and Murcury adepts, were scared they would be invaded. Scared that they would be forced to part with their greatest treasures. Their Princess Leona, she who predicts the future, and Prince Aren, he who changes the future. They were afraid they would have to part with their greatest treasures; Their Light adepts
We shall start, or resume if you will, the story at Mt Aleph, where Mathew, Tyrell, and Karis are stunned from fear, facing the Mourning Moon, the destruction of Angara, their home continent, at stake once again.
Chapter 1: Flee!
"T-T-Tyrell? M-M-Mathew? Please tell me that isn't what I think it is." Karis nearly pleaded.
"I wish I could Karis, I wish I could." Mathew said.
"Hey wait, where are dad and Isaac?" Tyrell asked, looking around the rocky surface.
"Surely they wouldn't stay here, right? Your dads are too smart to do that. I bet they left when they saw it to warn people. We should follow their lead." Karis said. Mathew nodded.
"We have to find our group as well. We could be in for a big fight here soon." Tyrell said.
"Are you crazy?!? Do you have any idea how long it will take to get to Belinsk again?!? And that's just to get Sveta! Think of the stops we'll have to make along the way to get the others! By that time, the Mourning Moon could have destroyed Angara!" Karis yelled.
"Karis has a point Tyrell. It would take far too long to get the others., we might not have a fight on our hands. All we can do now is find our dads and get out of here." Mathew said.
"Fine, but I'd feel better if we had the others here with us." Tyrell said.
"As would I old friend, but we can't always have what we want. Exhibit A." Mathew said, pointing at the Mouning Moon.
"Point taken." Tyrell said. The group ran as fast as they could, rushing down the mountain, until a faint yelling caught Mathew's attention.
"Wait, hold up guys. I think I hear someone yelling." Mathew said. He strained his ears to listen. The yelling grew steadely louder, and Mathew could make out his name, along with Tyrell's and Karis' being called. It was coming from back up the mountain, and was approaching them fast.
"I...I think that is my dad calling us!" Mathew said. And sure enough, he was right. Isaac, along with Garet, was running full speed down the mountain toward them. They both had large packs on their backs, and looked ready to travel. After another minute, they had caught up to them, both panting slightly.
"We thought you were already off the mountain." Mathew said.
"We were about to leave, but you beat us to it. We were still finishing up our preparations." Isaac said.
"For what?" Tyrell asked.
"Isaac thinks we will have a huge fight to deal with again, so he wants to go and gather up the others. He also think syou should do the same with your group." Garet said.
"That's what I said, but Karis insisted it would take too long." Tyrell said.
"It would have, but with my Quake Sphere and Odessey, along with Garet's Eruption and Liquifier psyenergy, we managed to buy enough time." Isaac said.
"How did you do that?" Tyrell asked.
"I cut the Mourning Moon into peices, then dug a huge crater in the ground." Isaac said.
"Then I shoved it into the crater, then turned it into a new volcano, which burned up the Mourning Moon. We did little more than delay it's return, however." Garet said.
"I missed your Odessey?!? Dang it! I was hoping to get some tips on mine. I think I'm doing it right, but I feel like their is something...loose in it." Mathew said.
"Later Mathew. For now, we part ways here. Meet up with us at Lemuria in one week. We might not have everyone by then, but we cannot afford to take any longer than that." Isaac said.
"We'll have to find Eoleo for that one, but I think we can do that." Mathew said.
"Alright, lets go. No time to waste!" Isaac declared, and they ran in opposite directions. Mathew heading toward Harapa, Isaac to Kalay, both hoping to get started on their member re-recruitment.
In the Sea of Time, five Lemurian ships gathered just on the outskirts of the hidden Lyresk. On the front boat, stood two Jupiter adepts, one male, one female.
"Ivan, Sheba, we cannot thank you enough for this. We are sorry if this is a bad time for the two of you, but we couldn't turn to anyone else." A lemurian said.
"It's alright. Now, what do you want us to do?" Ivan asked.
"No one in Lemuria is a Jupiter adept, being all Murcury adepts. None of us has the psyenergy Reveal. The two of you were the first ones to come to mind, and seeing as you two are so skilled with it, who better to ask? We need the two of you to use Reveal on this entire area. We have reason to believe there is something hidden here." He said.
"Yikes. That is a big area to reveal. Sheba, think you can do it with me?" Ivan asked.
"Easy enough with help." Sheba said. They clasped hands, and focused their psyenergy to a point where they had never done before.
"Lady Leona! Lord Aren! We are about to be discovered! What should we do?" A soldier asked. No responce, but the soldier knew he was heard. Deep in the palace, the soldier left them to think. Aren then turned to his twin sister Leona, who was in a deep meditation. After a second, she came out of it.
"What did you see?" Aren asked.
"We have a chance to speak with them, but if we fight, we will not win, and the two of us will die." Leona said.
"Music to my ears. You know what I have to say to that right? I say it whenever you have predicted our deaths in the past." Aren said, clasping on white-gold armor.
Leona nodded. "If you don't like life's hand"
"Fight for a better one." Aren finished. He gathered his other armor, and went to his always faithful Light Blade, and swung it on his back, ready to use when he would need it.