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...prize for the trainer...
...becaues he battled great!...
...that magical pokeball that...
...could catch everything but...
(I understand nothing again. Why did he get a prize? He lost to that Bayleef & Goukazaru, didn't he?)
(You said he got the prize because he battled great!!)
...he commited a suicide...
(I expected another reply to the ...prize for the trainer... and since Max is the hero, I had to continue. Who committed suicide?!? I suppose it's Max.)
...His brother took his...
...pokemon,as Max's will...
(Hey hey, nothing make sense. I'm confused. Start another story immediatly.)
(I know that nothing makes sense! I don't even understand what you are saying! But who cares!)
...said so. His brother...
(I think I also want a new story!)
YES I think JimLink has a point.I think that this Story Game should be locked and another should be oppened.In the new one we should write a deeper plot and phrases with a meaning.Post here (only one post) if you agree, and I will lock this thread creating a new one.Do not create a new one though.Wait for me to do it.
That's exactly what I want. How about making the new story like a fanfic? Everyone will post a whole sentence, not just 4 words. I think it would be awesome.
My vote: YES, end this story
Well, the original idea was Aluado's, so I think that it should remain the 4-word Story Game.
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