03-10-2013, 08:47 PM
03-10-2013, 08:51 PM
(03-10-2013 08:47 PM)grassdragon Wrote: [ -> ]It's pretty good. I get a little confused with who is talking but other than that I like it.
In which part,exactly?
I can edit it a bit,so it looks like your style,which is sth like:
Leo:Hi!
Aaron:Hi Leo!
Crystal:Hi Leo and Aaron!
(I mean instead of ''-Go Machoke!'' I write ''SD Grunt 1:Go Machoke!'')
03-10-2013, 08:53 PM
That's a good idea! Please do so!
04-10-2013, 03:45 AM
I can just imagine Aaron and Professor Oak shooting the breeze about IV values, competitive strategies, legendary giveaways, etc.
I can't stop laughing! :'(
I can't stop laughing! :'(
04-10-2013, 03:23 PM
(04-10-2013 03:45 AM)Alcovich Wrote: [ -> ]I can just imagine Aaron and Professor Oak shooting the breeze about IV values, competitive strategies, legendary giveaways, etc.
I can't stop laughing! :'(
Well,there won't be that kind of conversation.
Chapter 3 spoilers (Click to View)
I will write the dialogues like in GD's fanfic from now on,so we avoid confusion.
Read the rest with your own risk (Click to View)
Skorp will teach Leo and Aaron how to catch Pokemon the Like A Boss way,when sth funny happens,which will result in Leo being an owner of a special Pokemon,which is not found in Sinnoh.Clues:it's an Unova non-legendary non-evolved Pokemon
In Jubilife City a contest will be held.1vs1 battles with the only Pokemon allowed being Pidgey,Tailow,Starly and Pidove.The winner gets a shiny Turtwig.The winner is too obvious.
In Jubilife City a contest will be held.1vs1 battles with the only Pokemon allowed being Pidgey,Tailow,Starly and Pidove.The winner gets a shiny Turtwig.The winner is too obvious.
04-10-2013, 05:09 PM
(04-10-2013 03:23 PM)8hachi8 Wrote: [ -> ]Read the rest with your own risk (Click to View)In Jubilife City a contest will be held.1vs1 battles with the only Pokemon allowed being Pidgey,Tailow,Starly and Pidove.The winner gets a shiny Turtwig.The winner is too obvious.
Obvious you say? I don't think it's obvious at all.
04-10-2013, 05:24 PM
(04-10-2013 05:09 PM)grassdragon Wrote: [ -> ](04-10-2013 03:23 PM)8hachi8 Wrote: [ -> ]Read the rest with your own risk (Click to View)In Jubilife City a contest will be held.1vs1 battles with the only Pokemon allowed being Pidgey,Tailow,Starly and Pidove.The winner gets a shiny Turtwig.The winner is too obvious.
Obvious you say? I don't think it's obvious at all.
Spoiler (Click to View)
Who asked for a Turtwig?
The member who asked for a Turtwig will be the competition's winner.
Besides,Leo gets something else,when Skorp will fail.
The member who asked for a Turtwig will be the competition's winner.
Besides,Leo gets something else,when Skorp will fail.
04-10-2013, 05:28 PM
(04-10-2013 05:24 PM)8hachi8 Wrote: [ -> ](04-10-2013 05:09 PM)grassdragon Wrote: [ -> ](04-10-2013 03:23 PM)8hachi8 Wrote: [ -> ]Read the rest with your own risk (Click to View)In Jubilife City a contest will be held.1vs1 battles with the only Pokemon allowed being Pidgey,Tailow,Starly and Pidove.The winner gets a shiny Turtwig.The winner is too obvious.
Obvious you say? I don't think it's obvious at all.
Spoiler (Click to View)Who asked for a Turtwig?
The member who asked for a Turtwig will be the competition's winner.
Besides,Leo gets something else,when Skorp will fail.
Spoiler (Click to View)
I'm trolling you. I know who gets the Turtwig.
08-10-2013, 07:14 PM
Spoiler (Click to View)
Obviously it's Professor Sycamore.
29-10-2013, 06:01 AM
(08-10-2013 07:14 PM)Alcovich Wrote: [ -> ]Spoiler (Click to View)Obviously it's Professor Sycamore.
Spoiler (Click to View)
No, it's OBVIOUSLY Grey who gets the Shiny Turtwig. Then he trades the Shiny Turtwig to Kalas Rey for a Shiny Chespin who trades it to Celesi for a Shiny Trapinch.
@Hachi
Any idea when Chapter 3 will be out?
29-10-2013, 03:42 PM
(29-10-2013 06:01 AM)grassdragon Wrote: [ -> ]@Hachi
Any idea when Chapter 3 will be out?
Sorry!
I was busy with Y.
In a few days.
WARNING!
This fanfic will contain X/Y spoilers.
29-10-2013, 04:55 PM
(29-10-2013 03:42 PM)8hachi8 Wrote: [ -> ](29-10-2013 06:01 AM)grassdragon Wrote: [ -> ]@Hachi
Any idea when Chapter 3 will be out?
Sorry!
I was busy with Y.
In a few days.
WARNING!
This fanfic will contain X/Y spoilers.
I understand completely. X and Y have taken a lot of time away from my writing too.
XY stuff, yay!
09-11-2013, 01:01 AM
Do you remember when Hachi did a fanfiction?
I do. Next chapter, please!
I do. Next chapter, please!
09-11-2013, 01:19 AM
(09-11-2013 01:01 AM)Alcovich Wrote: [ -> ]Do you remember when Hachi did a fanfiction?
I do. Next chapter, please!
I'll upload it in about 9-10 hours.
09-11-2013, 02:19 AM
(09-11-2013 01:19 AM)8hachi8 Wrote: [ -> ]I'll upload it in about 9-10 hours.
Add 14 days to those hours and that's when TBD will get Chapter 3!