20-01-2008, 09:39 PM
21-01-2008, 03:56 PM
5 gyms?!OMG....Then,it would be hardest for Rose to win them.I mean:the more.the easiest,the less,the hardest.I like the continue!But are the little girl's parents dead?o.o
21-01-2008, 04:13 PM
wow amizing i love my role but its a bit small
21-01-2008, 04:15 PM
Νο it is not.This is a PART of the adventure,dont forget it.o.o....
Tony and Cellon are not just Crystal's brothers...!They are some of the....oups.I will not sa this!^^
Tony and Cellon are not just Crystal's brothers...!They are some of the....oups.I will not sa this!^^
21-01-2008, 04:21 PM
freshia team menbers????
21-01-2008, 09:52 PM
No,dont worry!!They are the elite 2+3.Happy?^^
And,also,I want to say that I wont write in Mondays -well,expect this one!-
cause I have english lessons.
And,also,I want to say that I wont write in Mondays -well,expect this one!-
cause I have english lessons.
22-01-2008, 12:50 AM
Oh, no, spoilers! Nice work! Sorry for not reading in a while, though.
22-01-2008, 05:28 PM
hi, well, i have n't posted anything yet, since i had no time at all...anyway, i like your story very much!!! continue! and we are ready to see fascinating pokemon battles!!!!
25-01-2008, 09:50 PM
ΟΚ,here is the continue!
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We continue walking...And now,FINALLY,we reached the temple.
-Oh-ho...
-What?says Crystal
-Um,....there are many Absols,Lunatones and Solrocks around here...
-So what,Cellon?Rose will be able to catch one more pokemon!
-Hey,wait Crystal!I have only 5 pokeballs!!!How I will....
-Iouou...A wild Absol appeared.
-Tony,says Cellon,catch it!Tony threw an ultra ball.But the wild pokemon escaped,and attacked.
-Pika,get out!!!
-PIKA PIKA!!!
-Pika,use Thunderbolt!!
-Pika?She doesnt seem to be able to use Thunderbolt.
-How about a....Slash then?
-Pika!she said,and she smiled a little.And then,she hit Absol.
-Ioououou....!!!Wild absol fell down.
-Tony,use your ultra ball now!Tony threw the ultra ball,and,this time,the absol was caught.
-Yesh!Take it Rose!
-But....I did not...Its your pokemon.I cant take it,you threw the ultra ball!!
-Well,it is mine.But,since its mine....
-...he can do....continued Crystal...
-....whatever he wants with it! ended Cellon.
-So,now,take it.It is a gift fromus.
-Oh..thank you.Thank you!Is it a male or a female absol?
-He is a guy!said Cellon smiling.
-Then I will name him...er...Dragon.
-OK,that is a fine name!
We got deep in the temple.Now,all the walls are diamond-crysatl made.And finally.....
-Rose,look!whispered Crystal.A pink little thing,was sleeping on a ig diamond.There was a marble sign which wrote:"Please,respect Mew.It will sleep until the chosen one comes..."
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Wait for the continue please!
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We continue walking...And now,FINALLY,we reached the temple.
-Oh-ho...
-What?says Crystal
-Um,....there are many Absols,Lunatones and Solrocks around here...
-So what,Cellon?Rose will be able to catch one more pokemon!
-Hey,wait Crystal!I have only 5 pokeballs!!!How I will....
-Iouou...A wild Absol appeared.
-Tony,says Cellon,catch it!Tony threw an ultra ball.But the wild pokemon escaped,and attacked.
-Pika,get out!!!
-PIKA PIKA!!!
-Pika,use Thunderbolt!!
-Pika?She doesnt seem to be able to use Thunderbolt.
-How about a....Slash then?
-Pika!she said,and she smiled a little.And then,she hit Absol.
-Ioououou....!!!Wild absol fell down.
-Tony,use your ultra ball now!Tony threw the ultra ball,and,this time,the absol was caught.
-Yesh!Take it Rose!
-But....I did not...Its your pokemon.I cant take it,you threw the ultra ball!!
-Well,it is mine.But,since its mine....
-...he can do....continued Crystal...
-....whatever he wants with it! ended Cellon.
-So,now,take it.It is a gift fromus.
-Oh..thank you.Thank you!Is it a male or a female absol?
-He is a guy!said Cellon smiling.
-Then I will name him...er...Dragon.
-OK,that is a fine name!
We got deep in the temple.Now,all the walls are diamond-crysatl made.And finally.....
-Rose,look!whispered Crystal.A pink little thing,was sleeping on a ig diamond.There was a marble sign which wrote:"Please,respect Mew.It will sleep until the chosen one comes..."
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Wait for the continue please!
25-01-2008, 10:24 PM
Yay, Great job there mirka. Very good. What legendary pokemon you'll see?
26-01-2008, 02:19 PM
yes, good job! will you also catch mew?? are you the chosen??
27-01-2008, 07:20 PM
You will see now!^^
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-What are you waiting for Crystal?said Cellon.
-CELLON!she said sadly.Then she whispered something at his ear.
-Oh dear.I did ...em...sorry...I didn t remember it!
-It is OK....
-Excuse me...What are you talking about?But I had no answer.Crystal suddenly got a crystal out of her pocket,and she said..."Its time then."
-Tony,give them to Rose.Tony gave me 15 ultra balls,3 Master Balls,4 quick balls and 5 timer balls.He also gave me 15 hyper potions,20 potions and 19 super potions.Also he gave me one water stone.
-Tony,take them!Why you....Crystal gave me the crystal.
-Take it,Rose,and in front of Mew.
-WHAT!?
-Go...I went.
-Now,put the Crystal near Mew.Crystal came next to me.Her legs didnt touch the ground anymore,she was a...spirit?!
-Mew...Wake up,and...see if Rose is the chosen...she said.I noticed that Cellon and Tony had tears in their eyes.And suddenly,the crystal started glowing!Crystal did too.And then,...
-Myuuu.....Mew was awaken!
-Mew,please see if Rose is the chosen.Crystal was almost invisable.What was going on!?
-Myuu....Mew winked.Then,it came in front of me,and looked me in my eyes.
-Myuu...!it winked at Crystal,almost smiling.
-Unbielevable!Rose is...said Tony,
-...the chosen!!!continued Cellon.
-Mew,do you bieleve she would be a good owner?
-Myuu!it winked happily.
-Well,then,battle her,so she can own you...Crystal was "fully" a spirit now.Her hair had grown very long,the diamonds on her head were glowing,she was wearing a pallium,and she had wings.
-Myuuu!
-Em...er...ok...then....Go,Celebi!
-beeee!
-Celebi,use Giga Drain!Celebi did,and Mew was hit,and then flinched.Then I used one Master Ball.And...MEW WAS CAUGHT!!!
-Good,Rose.Name it now.
-Its name is Mew.
-All right....Cellon and Tony were crying now.
-Now...what?
-Now,you will fight Team Freshia...Win Pokemon League,and become the greatest trainer in Astreon.Crystal moved her wings,and went higher.
-Crystal,WAIT!Where are you going!
-Goodbye Rose...Cellon...Tony....
-G-g-good bye....sister...they said.
-Goodbye...I said,and then I suddenly understood.She...was...dead.
-Myuu....Mew said from its pokeball.
-Goodbye to you too Mew,Celebi,Glory,Pika,Dragon.Be good pokemon to Rose.
-Beee....
-Tiuuu....
-Ioouuu...
-Pika-pi...
-Myuu...Then,Crystal dissappeared...
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Wait for the continue!
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-What are you waiting for Crystal?said Cellon.
-CELLON!she said sadly.Then she whispered something at his ear.
-Oh dear.I did ...em...sorry...I didn t remember it!
-It is OK....
-Excuse me...What are you talking about?But I had no answer.Crystal suddenly got a crystal out of her pocket,and she said..."Its time then."
-Tony,give them to Rose.Tony gave me 15 ultra balls,3 Master Balls,4 quick balls and 5 timer balls.He also gave me 15 hyper potions,20 potions and 19 super potions.Also he gave me one water stone.
-Tony,take them!Why you....Crystal gave me the crystal.
-Take it,Rose,and in front of Mew.
-WHAT!?
-Go...I went.
-Now,put the Crystal near Mew.Crystal came next to me.Her legs didnt touch the ground anymore,she was a...spirit?!
-Mew...Wake up,and...see if Rose is the chosen...she said.I noticed that Cellon and Tony had tears in their eyes.And suddenly,the crystal started glowing!Crystal did too.And then,...
-Myuuu.....Mew was awaken!
-Mew,please see if Rose is the chosen.Crystal was almost invisable.What was going on!?
-Myuu....Mew winked.Then,it came in front of me,and looked me in my eyes.
-Myuu...!it winked at Crystal,almost smiling.
-Unbielevable!Rose is...said Tony,
-...the chosen!!!continued Cellon.
-Mew,do you bieleve she would be a good owner?
-Myuu!it winked happily.
-Well,then,battle her,so she can own you...Crystal was "fully" a spirit now.Her hair had grown very long,the diamonds on her head were glowing,she was wearing a pallium,and she had wings.
-Myuuu!
-Em...er...ok...then....Go,Celebi!
-beeee!
-Celebi,use Giga Drain!Celebi did,and Mew was hit,and then flinched.Then I used one Master Ball.And...MEW WAS CAUGHT!!!
-Good,Rose.Name it now.
-Its name is Mew.
-All right....Cellon and Tony were crying now.
-Now...what?
-Now,you will fight Team Freshia...Win Pokemon League,and become the greatest trainer in Astreon.Crystal moved her wings,and went higher.
-Crystal,WAIT!Where are you going!
-Goodbye Rose...Cellon...Tony....
-G-g-good bye....sister...they said.
-Goodbye...I said,and then I suddenly understood.She...was...dead.
-Myuu....Mew said from its pokeball.
-Goodbye to you too Mew,Celebi,Glory,Pika,Dragon.Be good pokemon to Rose.
-Beee....
-Tiuuu....
-Ioouuu...
-Pika-pi...
-Myuu...Then,Crystal dissappeared...
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27-01-2008, 08:28 PM
wow, cool!
27-01-2008, 09:03 PM
Well,thank you umbreon...But I dont think that I will leave Crystal dead...:OMG spoilers lol:
28-01-2008, 03:14 PM
Great job.